Pocket Money should be given to children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is often argued that whether the

money

should be given to

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or not. A lion’s share of society

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it,

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more oppose it. I partially agree with the statement because it is the need of hours;

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development has some drawbacks too. The following paragraphs would describe my opinion with suitable example.

First

and foremost, it gives children the ability to handle

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matters efficiently because we can learn any ability with regular

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. To explain, it improves off- springs ability to solve addition, subtraction related mathematics problems.

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their academic performance improves too.

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, it inculcates in them the habit of saving, which is an important life skill and

hence

understands the benefits of saving.

Furthermore

, children can

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their uncertain needs in case of emergency while commuting to and fro from educational

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and other places.

On the other hand

, there are some adverse effects of

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practice

.

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can involve themselves in anti-social activities if they had

money

, like

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se of drugs, smoking habit. To illustrate,

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practice

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also

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them from

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tudy because their focus will be on buying unwanted things of their choice. It

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xtra burden on the pocket of parents.

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ountry like India 40% population is hand to mouth it is quite tough for

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parents to follow

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practice

. To conclude, I can say that each development has its own benefits as well as adverse effects. But as per my opinion

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it is the need of today’s era but all parent should not be forced to follow it. Children should be given pocket

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as per their age and requirements and parents must ask them for

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