Pocket Money should be given to children. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It is often argued that whether the
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should be given to
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or not. A lion’s share of society
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it,
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more oppose it. I partially agree with the statement because it is the need of hours;
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development has some drawbacks too. The following paragraphs would describe my opinion with suitable example.
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and foremost, it gives children the ability to handle
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matters efficiently because we can learn any ability with regular
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. To explain, it improves off- springs ability to solve addition, subtraction related mathematics problems.
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their academic performance improves too.
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, it inculcates in them the habit of saving, which is an important life skill and
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understands the benefits of saving.
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, children can
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their uncertain needs in case of emergency while commuting to and fro from educational
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and other places.
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, there are some adverse effects of
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practice
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can involve themselves in anti-social activities if they had
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, like
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se of drugs, smoking habit. To illustrate,
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practice
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distracts
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them from
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tudy because their focus will be on buying unwanted things of their choice. It
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puts
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xtra burden on the pocket of parents.
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,
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ountry like India 40% population is hand to mouth it is quite tough for
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parents to follow
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practice
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. To conclude, I can say that each development has its own benefits as well as adverse effects. But as per my opinion
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it is the need of today’s era but all parent should not be forced to follow it. Children should be given pocket
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as per their age and requirements and parents must ask them for
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ccount.
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