SOME PEOPLE THINK IT IS BETTER TO CHOOSE FRIENDS WHO ALWAYS HAVE THE SAME OPINION AS THEM. OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVE IT IS GOOD TO HAVE FRIENDS WHO SOMETIMES DISAGREE WITH THEM. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

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Friendship is a ship that sails forever in the right company and with people who attempt to do anything to keep the spark alive.

However

, there are different opinions about what kind of friends to choose from. Some individuals think it is better to opt for companions who have a similar mindset

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them. Whereas other groups contradict

this

thinking.

Firstly

, let's emphasize condition A where people believe in associating with the public who shares like-mindedness. "A friend in need is a friend indeed", the concept is not appreciated in

this

condition.

For instance

, if there is a situation where one person had to go through a heated discussion with a higher authority

such

as the boss the argument can go harsh since there is no one to subside that clause which could, in turn, lead to chaos and imbalance,

further

leading to severe outcomes that they could repent

afterward

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On the contrary

, If there is a friend who is from the opposite mindset the situation can be handled in a different perspective and could be calmed down

instead

of causing a rupture and

thus

leading to guiltiness in the future.

Secondly

, if condition B is observed,

that is

, if companionships are among differential mindsets

this

could be a perfect example of the saying "opposites attract".

However

such

pals are often noticed

quarreling

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among themselves due to opposing points of view. In

this

scenario, they are likely to preview weak fellowships.

Further

leading to the conversion of alibis to enemies,

such

an outcome is not

favorable

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to either of the parties. In conclusion, I would like to be biased in

such

a commitment when

this

kind of hypothetical situations arise to maintain peace and harmony among all the mob. But when forced to land on any decision, I would choose a partner who reflects similar mental instincts as what I present. With few situations to contradict them and to be able to form a spine in hard times.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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bond
support
unconditional love
shared values
mutual understanding
trust
emotional well-being
interdependence
societal norms
companionship
loyalty
advice
experiences
mentorship
trustworthy
reliable
reliable
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SOME PEOPLE THINK IT IS BETTER TO CHOOSE FRIENDS WHO ALWAYS HAVE THE SAME OPINION AS THEM. OTHER PEOPLE BELIEVE IT IS GOOD TO HAVE FRIENDS WHO SOMETIMES DISAGREE WITH THEM. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist. To what extent do you agree?

You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter ● explain why you changed jobs ● describe your new job ● tell him/her your other news.

Some people say that humanitarian subjects such as philosophy, history and literature that people study in universities have no value for their future career. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and relevant examples.

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.