Some people warn that the era of silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

It has been a heated debate on whether

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will disinterest gradually going to

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inema in the future.

Although

, due to the new normal

life

there have a few traditional cinemas have closed recently, but that won't decrease the degree of love to the

cinema

. To commence with, there have

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several

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disagree

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with

this

view.

Firstly

,

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cinema

is one of the popular entertainment from the past until

this

day and age,

that

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a culture in our

life

.

For instance

, in my hometown, a lot of teenagers are still having dating in

cinema

with their partner, which our parents or grandparents did in the past as well.

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of

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rice is friendly for all age. As

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technological advances, people can be

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a luxurious movie with a high quality of

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hole 3D surrounded speakers and a huge, 8k resolution screen TV after they paid an expensive bill.

However

,

cinema

only

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to pay 15

pound

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for a ticket or you can add another 5

pound

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for your soft drinks.

Thus

,

cinema

is one of the important entertainment in our

life

, people can watch

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high quality of movie irrespective of age .

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, in

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modern day

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, as

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technological advances, the

cinema

have developed to various type of operation, which provide a

high quality

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service with

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onderful atmosphere, beautiful landscape and delicious food.

For instance

,

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this

year December Mov’ in boat

cinema

have organised an

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cinema

in Darling harbour. People can

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to enjoy the movie on the small boat or booking a king size of bed with friends or you can boarding the start

vip

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VIP

via

boat with a luxury meal and

vip

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VIP

bar service. To sum up, I believe that

cinema

culture

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been impressed in our

life

,

also

the

cinema

operation has

became

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advanced and comfort.