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Now a day the surveillance is happening at almost all public places is it good or perceived bad by the people. What are its advantages and disadvantages?

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With the booming population, crime is increasing at an alarming rate all over the world. To curb violation authority have to take precautionary measures in that
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 keep
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 on people and places as precautionary measures. Some people find it necessary and others believe it is bad. I personally think that keeping
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 on public places is beneficial for society and country as well. Nowadays Crime is happening at every
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 at some corner of the world, to prevent it and to grab the criminals every administration have to take some measures. As public places are more crowded
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 possibilities of crime taking place are more
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 authority have to maintain the security of place and people for that they have to keep
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 of place. By putting
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 the
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 can monitor the activity of suspicious people
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 gain some valuable intel for future crimes by recording their movement.
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overnment have put CCTV cameras and metal detectors in Akshardham Temple of Gandhinagar as it is visited by 50000 people every day,
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 keeping track of every individual visiting it is must to prevent any attack on a temple that can jeopardize the lives of thousands of people. Several security agents can
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 be deployed at public places that can handle any situation. On other hand, by having
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 on public places
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llegal way that can affect the privacy of individuals.
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,CCTVs can record private moments of public and it can be misused in many ways.
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,all people should be treated as criminals. Agglomerating all the points described above it can be concluded that the
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 should put
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 on public places for security reasons
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 to curb the crime. Its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Surveillance
  • Security
  • Crime prevention
  • Footage
  • Public safety
  • Privacy concerns
  • Consent
  • Distrust
  • Behaviour
  • Data management
  • Data breaches
  • Misuse of information
  • Targeting
  • Socio-political tensions
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