Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?

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housing and accommodation, in

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countries like India , where it is

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providing housing to the common person. They have come up with the plan to encourage everyone to buy and rent a house it can be in the form of concession or other benefits giving to the personnel.

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Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem? What can be done to help reduce the number of homeless people?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays some professionals such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?

Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Describe some of the problems overreliance on cars can cause and suggest a possible solution.

the money spent by goverenment on space programmes would e better spent on vitl public services such asschool and hospitals.To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.