You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter regarding

move

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into a rented apartment

month. My name is Kailash Kamble and I am

student

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a student

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your institute

since

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for

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last

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1 year. I took the admission for 2 years UX/UI full-time course and

also

got hostel facility from your

well known

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institute. As per earlier conversation vai an email it is informed that I will

left

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leave

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hostel

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the hostel

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month. Since

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apply

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I got

private

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a private

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sharing

accommidation

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accommodation

facility along with my other friends. There was

serious

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health issue I

was face

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apply

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last

week. My friend went to the doctor along with me since I was feeling very weak. After

few

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a few

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check-ups and

reports

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it was mentioned as typhoid. After consulting Doctor

suggest

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complete rest along with the medicine.

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, could not able move now from

hostel

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the hostel

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that does not mean I changed my plan but I am requesting you to please provide me some more time to recover. Please help me in

this

critical situation because I don't have any option now.

Furthermore

, any procedure required from my side please let me know I will follow all the instructions according to rules and

regulatioms

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regulations

. Look forward

for

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positive feedback from you. Yours Faithfully, Kailash Kamble.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

204 words

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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Structure your letter

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal questions such as their hobbies and interest, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Discuss both side and give your opinion.

in many countries government are investing in new technology to deal with the public Why is this happening? do you think it is an approriate use of government money?

Several cities around the globe subscribed the idea of vertical development for residential buildings, others promtote independent houses in larger areas.

•Task 2: In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their families and friends. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?