You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding
move
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into a rented apartment
next
month. My name is Kailash Kamble and I am
student
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a student
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of
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at
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your institute
since
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for
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last
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1 year. I took the admission for 2 years UX/UI full-time course and
also
got hostel facility from your
well known
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institute. As per earlier conversation vai an email it is informed that I will
left
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hostel
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the hostel
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on
next
month. Since
,
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I got
private
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a private
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sharing
accommidation
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accommodation
facility along with my other friends. There was
serious
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health issue I
was face
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in
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last
week. My friend went to the doctor along with me since I was feeling very weak. After
few
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check-ups and
reports
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it was mentioned as typhoid. After consulting Doctor
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complete rest along with the medicine.
Hence
, could not able move now from
hostel
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that does not mean I changed my plan but I am requesting you to please provide me some more time to recover. Please help me in
this
critical situation because I don't have any option now.
Furthermore
, any procedure required from my side please let me know I will follow all the instructions according to rules and
regulatioms
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regulations
. Look forward
for
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positive feedback from you. Yours Faithfully, Kailash Kamble.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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