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some people believe that television programs are of no real value for children . how far do you agree or disagree?

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Television is the accessible media. It has a wide range of information for its viewers. Some people think that television programs are harmful
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 children. whereas, some saying it is useful for children to receive lots of knowledge. I strongly believe
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violence, disrespect etc.
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rogram can create
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eenager and tend towards them where they forget the feeling of love, peace and humidity.
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ong time of period they
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