Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people hold the belief that nuclear
power
should be used more than other sources of energy
because it satisfies the global demand for energy
. While I agree with the apparent benefits of nuclear power
, I believe that it also
has potential dangers involved.
Nuclear power
is very friendly with the environment and has advantages for people. First
of all, when we use nuclear energy
for production, it releases the lack of carbon dioxide emission into the atmosphere compared with other sources like coal, gas, etc. Secondly
, in the past, electricity generation by s
ource like coal only produced a few units which Add an article
a
was
not enough to provide for the demand of humans. Change the verb form
were
However
, in the
modern time, thanks to nuclear Remove the article
apply
energy
, we are able to create huge amounts of power
. Therefore
, we will have a large amount of electricity to serve many people.
On the other hand
, although
nuclear energy
has a variety of advantages, it also
has negative impacts which could outweigh its merits. To begin
with, many countries could not build nuclear power
stations because of the fact that it is costly to construct. In addition
, nuclear energy
is not well-known in developing countries like Vietnam, Africa, etc. Furthermore
, accidental radiation leak is one of the most serious drawbacks of nuclear power
. Although
radiation leak can be controlled but
if it happened, it would pose a threat to people's health and the environment which was allocated surrounding Remove the conjunction
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this
nuclear power
plant. Moreover
, if nuclear energy
is taken advantage of by terrorism, the world’s peace will be threatened by nuclear weapons and it cause
war among different countries.
To sum up, I partly agree with the opinion that nuclear Change the verb form
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energy
should be used for meeting ever-increasing global needs instead
of using other sources of power
. However
, we should pay attention to its
disadvantages.Change the pronoun
their
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