The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
In recent days, the numbers of people buying through websites have been drastically increased. It is thought by some that eventually retail outlets in
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arket will be permanently shut down. In my view, even though numerous individuals have moved towards online shopping, there are still a few products and services which will continue to be purchased or availed in person.
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, those shops will continue to attract more customers. For example
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, the tendency of people to purchase some products by visiting stores will not get vanished.
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nvestment will not be bought online. The prime reason is the risk involved in it while buying online. Add an article
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is due to the fact that the display images of the products are often misleading as compared to original appearance. To illustrate, many builders post pictures of their projects in their online platforms in a way that to influence buyers, due to which people do not trust them and buy it only after visiting the builder face to face. Therefore
, it is apparent that had there not been any risk element, many would not have refrained themselves from buying high value
products online.
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