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With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging such areas?

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Because of the growing human population,
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emand
of
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 oil and gas is increasing and humans
attemtept
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attempt
 to move into untouched natural places
such
 as forest where a thousand animals live. I think that
this
 human's actions have a bad and serious effect on pollution which has an important relation to human, and animals and plants
lives
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 areas.
Firstly
, people' actions can affect
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others
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 living creatures
such
 as vegetations and animals. Since nineteen's century, a lot of species of animals have
dissappeared
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disappeared
 because of the industrial revolution. So, we can say that people don't care about
others
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 living creatures for their good or to be
more rich
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. They see that their
life
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 conditions
is
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 more important and valuable than
other's
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.
However
, they should learn their damage
on
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 the world and they need to quit to fell trees or make another catastrophe. Looking for sources has a strong and negative effect on other living creatures lives.
In addition
, trying to find new sources with damaging nature has a relation
with
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 human's
life
 condition. Previously, people used to able to drink
sea
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seawater
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water
 because it used to be clean, but now sixty
percent
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 of
sea
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seawater
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water
 is too dirty and harmful to cook or drink. Probably, in ten years, people may
to
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look for sources of clean
water
inspite
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in spite
 of oil and gas. Because
water
 is a necessary item on human's
life
 and they pollute it without thinking. So, people make their
life
 harder day by day. To conclude, when we look at the living creatures' lives, looking for fuel has an extraordinary negative effect.
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  • unspoiled
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  • sustainable energy
  • renewable resources
  • carbon footprint
  • environmental degradation
  • ecosystem conservation
  • indigenous rights
  • climate resilience
  • habitat destruction
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  • technological advancements
  • economic stimulus
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