The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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automobile appeared back in the UK in

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9th century and their amount continued to grow, eventually reaching 29 million in 2000.

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trend is worrying and causes many problems for the environment and people, so other types of

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and vehicles should be supported by international

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and norms, as well as cars should be under strict governmental control. 

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climate change. Their carbon footprint per year is massive and it causes many problems for the ecology. Before

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2000, cars had lead pieces in their fuel, which made emissions deadly for the atmosphere and generally dealt a lot of damage to the ecological condition of the Earth. Even though lead pieces are not used in fuel production anymore, other chemical elements still pollute the air of Britain and other countries. It is clear that solving the car problem is crucial for saving the Earth. 

In my opinion, reducing the number of cars will help to mitigate their negative effects on the environment. Busses and other types of public

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will easily replace cars for many people. They are a lot better in terms of time management and efficiency

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because they can

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hundreds of passengers at once. There are tonnes of other alternatives to classic cars in the environmental sphere.

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electro vehicles

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bicycles

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nature,

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, minimizing the negative effects.

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climate change. Encouraging public

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, reducing car usage and governmental limitations

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the only way to save our planet from destroying itself.