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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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There are people who say that the ability to watch films on phones or tablets made cinemas unneeded, but
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others believe that they reach full enjoyment from a
film
 only in a
cinema
. In my opinion
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if you are a person who is watching films to kill
time
 you would choose a phone but if your goal is feeling emotional -
cinema
 would be the best choice. From the one side, a new generation of gadgets has changed our regular lifestyle and has made us more practical people, who are unwilling to waste extra
time
 on something that might be done faster or more easily. Mobility, freedom, and
time
 are a new gold in modern society,
therefore
 people want to watch a
film
 anywhere they want or have an ability to pause it without spending the
time
 needed
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 to the
cinema
. From my perspective, phones or tablets might be used to kill
time
 but won’t give people the same feeling of emotions they get from a
film
. From the other side, only in a
cinema
 might you fully dive into the storyline or feel all the greatness of special effects.
Moreover
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a new level of experience through
such
 technologies as
high resolution
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 screens or speakers embedded or mounted into ceilings or floors. In my opinion, cinemas with new technologies, or even without, would be a better choice because people can immerse themselves into a new level of reality. In conclusion, if you are a person for whom
time
 is a priority, phones might give you a chance to save some, but if
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eeling is what you want from a
film
, go to a
cinema
 as I do.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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