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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Other, however, believe that boys and girl benefit more from attending mixed school. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion

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There has been heated debate on whether
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studying at single-sex
school
 is more effective than educate in the normal
school
. In
this
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 of parents think that it's a good idea for their daughter or son to study at girl-
school
 or boy-
school
.
Firstly
, students can be more concentrate on their study by attending a single-gender
school
. No doubt, a lot of teenagers or juveniles are interesting about love by
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pposite gender, so that might disturb on their studying.
Thus
, some of the parents prefer to send their children to
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 at single-sex college.
Moreover
, those people who believe that
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 studying separate can be safe and easy to protect their children. No one can argue that every year there has a hundred case of sexual assault around the
school
 area.
Hence
, studying at the single-gender academy can avoid it happens.
On the other hand
, others support the co-educational
system
 is butter.
Firstly
, the government can definitely use less cost to build the college compare with the single-educational
system
. For that case government have to find an empty space and spending more money to build another building for it. Which are wast time and social source.
Furthermore
, studying at the co-educational
system
 can promote children’s social techniques. Which can help them to build a great relationship with the opposite gender. To sum up, in my opinion, I have supported
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o-educational
system
. children can learn how to get along with other gender and develop community skill.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Coeducational
  • Single-sex education
  • Gender-specific
  • Adolescence
  • Social skills
  • Mutual respect
  • Critical thinking
  • Empathy
  • Collaboration
  • Competitive edge
  • Interpersonal dynamics
  • Equality and equity
  • Stereotypes
  • Focused learning
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