Some people have the opinion that big shopping malls are expensive places as they offer high costs for the products which can be bought at much cheaper prices from local shops. On the other hand, some people think that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping. Discuss both the opinions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People believe that big shopping centre
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way more expensive than local shops they probably sell their products
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high prices which are available at local markets at
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cheaper rates. While
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some people opine that malls are the best place for shopping. In
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will discuss both the sides of the argument and
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give my opinion. On the one hand, big shopping malls are expensive places because of their high rates on all small and big products.
For example
, shops in malls keep branded products and they charge not only for
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roduct but
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it contains charges for GST on every
product
which result of high cost and people usually finds
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imilar
product
on local shops where they do not provide any bill and they sell it on
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heaper rate.
Thus
, some people believe that malls are expensive than local shops.
On the other hand
, there are many benefits for people who usually do shopping from the malls because of that public are fascinated towards it for buying products.
For instance
, buying
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smart phone
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from big shopping centre will provide
geniune
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genuine
product
and it
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you
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ill with guarantee and warranty, and apart from that, they
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provide gift cards which are beneficial for them in
further
shopping. These benefits are missing in local shops and
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individuals gone through fraud activity and cheated on products.
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, environment and behaviour
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a significant role in
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, malls are attracting people by
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nfrastructure of shops and their luxurious way of treating their
custormers
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customers
which is generally liked by all ages of people.
As a result
, individuals prefer malls as they have all kinds of shops including
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atest clothes, home decor, children clothes and other
stuffs
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.
Thus
, it is time savvy and people spend more money here and consider it as
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best place for shopping. In conclusion, local shops sell their
product
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c
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heaper rate which is beneficial for some customers but shopping malls have latest and have
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arious collection which
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personally consider is the best place for shopping.
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