Some people have the opinion that big shopping malls are expensive places as they offer high costs for the products which can be bought at much cheaper prices from local shops. On the other hand, some people think that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping. Discuss both the opinions and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People believe that big shopping centre
are
way more expensive than local shops they probably sell their products Change the verb form
is
on
high prices which are available at local markets at Verify preposition usage
at
more
cheaper rates. WhileChange the word
apply
,
some people opine that malls are the best place for shopping. In Remove the comma
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will discuss both the sides of the argument and Change the capitalization
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give my opinion.
On the one hand, big shopping malls are expensive places because of their high rates on all small and big products. For example
, shops in malls keep branded products and they charge not only for p
roduct but Add an article
the
also
it contains charges for GST on every product
which result of high cost and people usually finds s
imilar Add an article
a
product
on local shops where they do not provide any bill and they sell it on c
heaper rate. Add an article
the
a
Thus
, some people believe that malls are expensive than local shops.
On the other hand
, there are many benefits for people who usually do shopping from the malls because of that public are fascinated towards it for buying products. For instance
, buying Add an article
a
smart phone
from big shopping centre will provide Correct your spelling
smartphone
geniune
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genuine
product
and it give
you Change the verb form
gives
b
ill with guarantee and warranty, and apart from that, they Add an article
a
the
also
provide gift cards which are beneficial for them in further
shopping. These benefits are missing in local shops and sometime
individuals gone through fraud activity and cheated on products. Replace the word
sometimes
Furthermore
, environment and behaviour also
plays
a significant role in Change the verb form
play
this
, malls are attracting people by i
nfrastructure of shops and their luxurious way of treating their Add an article
the
an
custormers
which is generally liked by all ages of people. Correct your spelling
customers
As a result
, individuals prefer malls as they have all kinds of shops including l
atest clothes, home decor, children clothes and other Add an article
the
stuffs
. Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
Thus
, it is time savvy and people spend more money here and consider it as a
best place for shopping.
In conclusion, local shops sell their Change the article
the
product
in
Verify preposition usage
at
c
heaper rate which is beneficial for some customers but shopping malls have latest and have Add an article
a
v
arious collection which Add an article
a
i
personally consider is the best place for shopping.Change the capitalization
I
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