People try new dangerous sports such as sky-diving or rock climbing. Should such sports be banned?
In recent years we have seen a considerable rise in dangerous or extreme
sports
. Although
I do not support an outright ban on such
sports
, I do feel that the government should regulate such
sports
so that they are played under supervision which will minimize the risks. It is irrefutable that dangerous or extreme sports
can cause injury or even death to the
individuals. Correct article usage
apply
However
, banning such
sports
is not the answer. Instead
, the government should ensure that the companies or centres which provide the facilities for such
sports
should meet the required, legal safety standards. Another argument against banning is that then
people would play them in hiding and then
they would be even more risky. After all
we all know that forbidden fruits taste sweeter. Add a comma
all,
Furthermore
, if government
bans Add an article
the government
such
sports
, it could be viewed as an infringement of the rights. Those who choose to participate in these sports
know the consequences. They know very well what is good or bad for them. They argue that if such
sports
are banned, then
all those other things that are harmful for
individuals should be banned like smoking, drinking and eating fast foods. What is more, those sportsmen who excel in Change the preposition
to
such
sports
bring name and fame to their country. They break records set by others and when they do so, the name of their country shines in the whole world. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, such
sports
should be performed after sufficient training and under supervision
of adults. Dangerous Correct article usage
the supervision
sport
companies should require a license Change the noun form
sports
for providing
Change preposition
to provide
such
training. To lay a ban on such
sports
is not the answer.Submitted by malini.bhadra on
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