“Prevention is better than cure” Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree?

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era of deadly and chronic diseases.

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we are currently witnessing the most advanced era of medical science in

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istory of mankind, still researching and treating every single disease is not practical. It is

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important to take

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measures considering the costs involved in the process in

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of the disease. Developing a

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for disease involved rigorous medical science

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and treatment which are expensive. Many-if not the most- countries and communities in the world are not economically sustainable to fund

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large amount of money.

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orld Bank, it would be quite challenging to ensure COVID 19 vaccination for the entire population of the country during

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pandemic.

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, some chronic diseases

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cancer and diabetes need life-long support. Public healthcare funded by the governments would find it difficult to conduct

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or borrow

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findings from other countries or giant pharmaceuticals companies and support patients with critical health conditions due to the limitation of resources and prioritise investing heavily on healthcare over other financial sectors.

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, not all diseases are preventable and there would always be diseases that will need

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ure. In the same vein, not all diseases are curable. It is important to initiate preventive measures for the diseases as the

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line of defence against them. It will allow

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the spread of many diseases,

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, many chronic diseases are

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as the threat to public health, which

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not easy to treat, and

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need life-long support, could be tackled more effectively by preventive measures

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as lifestyle modifications, awareness buildings and at times enforcing

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aw (e.g., imposing fine on smoking in public places; high tax on sugar production). These preventive measures could be more effective to improve the public health situation more. In a nutshell, it is practical to take more

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measures when it comes down to treating diseases where expensive

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and treatments involved in the process and given the limitation of resources that many nations face today.

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, government(s) should focus more on taking initiatives to take preventive measures rather than seeking

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ure for all diseases.