One of your pen friends wants to improve their English at a language school. they have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your pen friend. advise them about the following the teaching method, the number of students in a class and the number of hours a week.

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Dear Ahmed, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to help you choose

best

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English

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language school in your area. As per our

last

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discussion you were all ready to get yourself enrolled in any good

English

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teaching institute. I would strongly recommend you to opt for "bets" because

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improved my

English

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from there. They are the best in teaching

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English

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the English

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language, especially they are known due to their innovative teaching patterns. They make sure you work on your grammar, vocabulary in very interesting ways there would be different sessions, discussions

among-st

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students in the

class

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to make sure everyone gets along

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but not the least there would be prizes in different kinds of

class

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competitions. Another benefit to

take

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admission in bets is, they have only

limited

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a limited

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number of students in each

class

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and now they are extra careful due to Covid-19. which

results

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more focus on each student and your teacher would be in a better position to point out your weak points. you should expect to spend 2-3 hours daily in

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these hours would be

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bifurcated into different categories

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you would be spending some time span on group discussion, writing essays, reading

bbc

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BBC

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news out loud, rest of your time would be spent on your assignments. you should expect to spend 15 hours in

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weekly. Which is

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enough time for a responsible student

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as yourself to learn

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language in 2 months. But don't worry you would still get your Saturdays and Sundays off. I know you have to take part in your boxing matches

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these days so, you are covered there as well. I hope

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have

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been helpful for you in case you need

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assistance feel free to reach out. Best wishes AAA

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

303 words

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