One of your pen friends wants to improve their English at a language school. they have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your pen friend. advise them about the following the teaching method, the number of students in a class and the number of hours a week.

Dear Ahmed, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to help you choose
best
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English
language school in your area. As per our
last
discussion you were all ready to get yourself enrolled in any good
English
teaching institute. I would strongly recommend you to opt for "bets" because
i
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improved my
English
from there. They are the best in teaching
English
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language, especially they are known due to their innovative teaching patterns. They make sure you work on your grammar, vocabulary in very interesting ways there would be different sessions, discussions
among-st
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students in the
class
to make sure everyone gets along
last
but not the least there would be prizes in different kinds of
class
competitions. Another benefit to
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admission in bets is, they have only
limited
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number of students in each
class
and now they are extra careful due to Covid-19. which
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more focus on each student and your teacher would be in a better position to point out your weak points. you should expect to spend 2-3 hours daily in
class
these hours would be
further
bifurcated into different categories
for instance
you would be spending some time span on group discussion, writing essays, reading
bbc
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BBC
Bbc
news out loud, rest of your time would be spent on your assignments. you should expect to spend 15 hours in
class
weekly. Which is
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enough time for a responsible student
such
as yourself to learn
this
language in 2 months. But don't worry you would still get your Saturdays and Sundays off. I know you have to take part in your boxing matches
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these days so, you are covered there as well. I hope
this
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been helpful for you in case you need
further
assistance feel free to reach out. Best wishes AAA
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