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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter -describe the situation -explain why you cannot continue at this time -say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................. ,

#job #course #teachers #-describe #situation #-explain #time #-say #action #addresses
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I want to stop my part-time evening program. I will describe the situation that why I cannot continue
this
 plan and I
also
 want you to refund my
pay
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. To explain the situation, due to one extra project granted to my company workload has increased on all employees,
therefore
 I have to devote extra two hours every day in office. Due to
this
 overtime work,I am unable to continue my evening time classes.
However
, the additional company project will end in two years, and
then
 I will start my course from the
hird
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third
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 year. In
this
 connection, I want my full payment back as
this
 is just
beginning
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 of the course and I will deposit the money again when I will restart it. I cannot leave the fee for two years as it will give me extra money in the form of interest. Hope you will understand my situation and act
accordingly
. Yours faithfully, Sunil Kumar
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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