Individual should take care of the environment or it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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In
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modern world. where people are so busy to make themselves better in society, there they totally forgot to keep safe the
environment
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. Some people think that
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is the only
government
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responsibility and some said that individual should think themselves about how to safe the
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.
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ext paragraphs with my opinion. On the side of the individual, they should start taking care of
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environment
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by themselves because
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nature
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gives a lot
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things to human and person's responsibility to keep safe their society with growing more trees or fewer
use
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woods or furniture products
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, in most of the countries human make their homes with wood and they
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use
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another furniture things like wooden kitchens and or wooden almirahs or even they
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the
use
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a piece of wood in luxurious cars to look more attractive,which we do not need in cars.
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, people can less
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of their personal vehicles because if they reduce the number of cars in society
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they can safe the
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to spreading more air pollution. On the other side, the
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is
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responsible to take care of
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if they would make some strict laws like produce only recyclable things or stop to produce the plastic bags or water bottles because of
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they can stop the pollution. The
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should make awareness camps to aware
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their social people to safe
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and or they can make a different budget to make a better
environment
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. In the end, both the individual and the
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should understand their responsibilities and work together to safe
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. If the
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is healthy,
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the human will grow more with the new generation.

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