Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value the quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In 
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 modern world, every sector has some rules to be followed by its employees. Same as 
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, some people believe that dressing is 
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 important for many workers in some sectors; 
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, others emphasize that the quality of an individual is more crucial 
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 of appearance. In my opinion, there is indeed some kind of works, like a job in the bank, where the proper dressing is too important. Fundamentally,various factor makes a section of society advocates that dressing is an important part of a job, and there are myriad reasons to substantiate. 
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, there are some places, where the difference between costumers and employees is very crucial in order to remove confusions. To illustrate, The workers in malls and supermarkets always wear a specific 
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, by which they get identified easily. 
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, Dressing 
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 reveals the level of employee in their sectors. For example, in banks, the 
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anager is slightly different from other workers, which is indeed helpful 
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, many people deem that working quality is much more vital than the appearance of an individual. Chiefly, the working efficiency is the major reason why an employee get selected for that work. As in many employments, including construction and other building works, the skill is the most notable criteria for 
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 success, the dressing is merely a waste. 
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 workers 
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 feel 
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 and irritation while wearing a particular 
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 since these works require more comfortability. In conclusion, 
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 many people reckon that appearing to be different while working is important, many against it by stating the quality of work in the matter. In my view, many works require a
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, but it is not compulsory for each employment.
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