In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

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seem
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that a lot of countries are
struggeling
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struggling
from young people forgotten their old
language
,
thus
it dying out.
This
problem appears as inevitable,
however
, the
manking
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making
mankind
may slow down
this
process.
To begin
, many countries are losing their old mother tongue simultaneously with dying
olders
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holders
. Traditional
language
is partly related to the old, owing to it was their spoken
language
,
however
, after few decades has gone, the
language
also
changed,
besides
, plenty of new words is developed by
y
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oung generation. To illustrate, in the South region of Africa, people used to speak their traditional
language
,
however
, nowadays, with new technologies have come there, teenagers turned out to quickly learn new words which
is
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more modern and
widespoken
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wide spoken
around their peers.
Hence
, the old
language
of
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outhern district has been forgetting. Another thing is that despite the new technologies
,
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if people learn their traditional
language
at schools, that saves the
language
. It is common knowledge that local
language
is the echo of the past, nation's culture,
hence
, protection of it should be
ponted
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pointed
out for all generations in the country.
For example
, many Asian countries
such
as Japan, China, and Korea, teach its students from
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primary school not only traditional
language
but
also
its importance. By doing
this
, students acquiring knowledge about national culture and their role for
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ountry,
hence
, their traditional
language
may be spoken more decades
further
. In conclusion, nowadays many states witnessing problems with forgiveness and endanger of their traditional
language
. It is
logically
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to conclude that if the sufficient actions
taken
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from the country, the young would conserve their old
language
.
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