In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

In the upcoming days, the individual will pick their own motherland for vacations and overseas will not be on the list of holidays. I completely agree with
this
our world is full of amazing places and everyone visits
such
places at least once.
Firstly
, I completely agree that people should be mindful of their own
country
culture, norms and traditions. It is important for them to devote their vacations by visiting each region which is worthy.
For instance
, if individuals go for a trip with their family to their own nation
instead
of foreign countries they will get to know
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ew language, backgrounds and cultures. What more is roaming is easier in their own nation
instead
of travelling in abroad.
Moreover
, each
country
has its own attractiveness so why not to explore
first
your own
country
.
Secondly
, it is easier to visit your own
country
instead
of others because you have to spend a lot
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extra money for your trips if you are travelling too far.
For example
, if you are travelling constantly to other countries and not aware of your own kingdom your future generation never recognize the worth of their own land and of course people will not go anywhere if get everything in their own motherlandhomey. In conclusion, I strongly believed that choosing
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wn motherland will get the generation knowledge in various ways and breathtaking views will open doors for opportunities. From all across the world tourist visit visits your
country
instead
of foreign countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestic tourism
  • international travel
  • cultural exchange
  • national pride
  • affordability
  • convenience
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • local businesses
  • comfort zone
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