Cam15- A friend of yours is thinking about applying for the same course that you did at university. He/she has asked for your advice about studying this subject. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • give details of the course you took at the university • explain why you recommend the university • give some advice about how to apply

#cam #friend #course #university #advice

Dear

Tairan

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Taiwan

, I hope you are doing well. I am writing in response

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your letter regarding

SPSS

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course that you would like to attend soon. I completed the same program

last

year

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and had a great experience. It was a three months certificate professional course offered by Dhaka

University

. I got excellent

faculties

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there who made

this

couse

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course

understandable and interesting to the students.

Moreover

, the course curriculum was up-to-date

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and covered within the scheduled periods. I highly recommending

this

subject

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the same

university

for you to participate for some reasons.

Firstly

, graduating from Dhaka

university

will enhance your knowledge

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and career profile.

Secondly

this

subject is taken in the evening for three days within a week;

therefore

, you will be able to attend classes after office hours.

Besides

, fees are

also

reasonable compared to the other institutes. As seats are limited, you are required to apply immediately for the

sesson

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session

season

. You can do the registration through

online

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webpage of

the

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Dhaka

University

and

also

make payment through

credit

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a credit

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card. I hope you will enjoy

this

learning and had

an overwhelming lessons

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. Give my love to your parents. Yours loving, Nipa

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

194 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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