In some countries, prison is seen as the solution to crime. However, some people believe that giving people a better education is a better way to prevent them from committing crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these ideas? Give your opinions based on your knowledge and experience.

In recent years, the increase in

crime

rate

has become controversial around the world. Some people assume that culprits should be managed in

prison

for preventing commit a

crime

again, while others argue that they have to attend some program that

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a better

education

. In

this

essay, I will elaborate on both statements and extend my ideas.

To begin

with, there are some merits of culprit

education

. More importantly,

this

manner could provide a chance to alter the offender lives.

In other words

, in fact, many and many culprits maintain that they do not have

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hoice to conduct an improper

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for surviving due to the lack of

education

which could offer to promote their abilities.

For example

, in Korean, most adolescent criminals commit a

crime

for living expenses, not attended to their school.

Therefore

, people would expect the positive results of giving culprits learnt various program not only

crime

's adverse effects but

also

academical studying process.

However

, using

prison

for reducing the number of

crime

rate

could bring effective results as well.

First

, the recidivism

rate

could reduce temporary because

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ulprit has to

stuck

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in

prison

for a while.

Second

, for the local governments noticed to citizens about some culprit inconvenient lifestyle in the

prison

, it could prevent imitation

crime

, while the learning programs which provide a better their lives.

Hence

, it is undeniable that

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rison's role could bring positive effects by

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revention of the

crime

. In conclusion, as mentioned above,

although

prison

and offering

education

programs have

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erits of reducing commuting

crime

, the way of using

prison

is more likely to decrease the

crime

rate

.

Therefore

, the local governments and relevant organizations should keep the

prison

system.