In some countries, prison is seen as the solution to crime. However, some people believe that giving people a better education is a better way to prevent them from committing crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these ideas? Give your opinions based on your knowledge and experience.

In recent years, the increase in

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rate

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has become controversial around the world. Some people assume that culprits should be managed in

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for preventing commit a

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again, while others argue that they have to attend some program that

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a better

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. In

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essay, I will elaborate on both statements and extend my ideas.

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with, there are some merits of culprit

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. More importantly,

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manner could provide a chance to alter the offender lives.

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, in fact, many and many culprits maintain that they do not have

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hoice to conduct an improper

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for surviving due to the lack of

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which could offer to promote their abilities.

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, in Korean, most adolescent criminals commit a

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for living expenses, not attended to their school.

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, people would expect the positive results of giving culprits learnt various program not only

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's adverse effects but

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academical studying process.

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, using

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for reducing the number of

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rate

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could bring effective results as well.

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, the recidivism

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could reduce temporary because

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ulprit has to

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in

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for a while.

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, for the local governments noticed to citizens about some culprit inconvenient lifestyle in the

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, it could prevent imitation

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, while the learning programs which provide a better their lives.

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, it is undeniable that

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rison's role could bring positive effects by

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revention of the

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. In conclusion, as mentioned above,

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and offering

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programs have

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erits of reducing commuting

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, the way of using

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is more likely to decrease the

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rate

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.

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, the local governments and relevant organizations should keep the

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system.