Some people believe that video games are beneficial to children whereas others believe that it has negative effects.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued by some individuals that virtual games put

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ositive impact on the children while others believe that it has more negative than positive. In

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both sides; followed by my personal opinion and a reasoned conclusion. Childhood is

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bliss and taking part in the games are certainly the most enjoyable and important part of the pre-teen age. Games along with the fun

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the children in their physical and mental growth.

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, as per the study conducted by UNICEF, kids who invest their time in the

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games are doing much better in the

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skills as compared to those who are more involved into the physical games.

Additionally

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games motivate the infants to solve the puzzles and finding the solutions which really helps them to deal with the problems in the real world.

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, every boon comes with a bane;

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as addiction, irritation, burning eyes and

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on the infants. A survey taken by AIMS states that the majority of the young kids gets their

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glasses in their early teenage.

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, they are least interested in the physical activities which put the major setback on their physical growth. Along with

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ajority of these kids don't have any company other than the

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games which makes them feel lonely. To conclude,

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games have become the unavoidable part of the

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life.

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xtreme side of anything can harm anyone.

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, I believe that a good balance between the physical and virtual activities will help the infants to grow in all aspects.