Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behaviour and to protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Handling kids is a much-debated topic. Parents and teachers come up with strict guidelines and many

rules

for

children

so that they behave

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and to keep them safe.

On the contrary

, I believe fewer

rules

with lots of freedom will help

children

to develop themselves as

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good human being and

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ensures their safety. In

this

essay, I will examine why providing liberty and restricting them less is necessary.

Firstly

,

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a crucial period of

children

's growth as during

this

period they develop several qualities. These attributes will shape them as a better individual with values in future. Parents and teachers should not be too conservative in their approach as

this

might result in a kid becoming narrow-minded and not open

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new ideas. One should not be forced to bind by the

rules

, because they will end up becoming dependent on every aspect of life. When a child is made to follow strict directives given by the elders, he/she may lose to think independently.

For example

, from a very young age if one is taught to behave in a certain way

then

even when the situation demands a kid cannot think of any innovative ways of handling the situation.

Secondly

, too much

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restriction will indeed have a negative impact on

children

mentally. When they are caged more and more, they develop a rebellious attitude within themselves which might burst out in future.

For example

, there was an incident in my hometown, where a teenage kid was denied a mobile phone for several days to play.

As a result

, the child in anger left the house and lost the way

while

coming back home.

Hence

, when kids are tied up there is a high chance that they take extreme steps which parents and teachers will have to regret later.

Hence

, a few necessary

rules

and greater freedom will help the

overall

benefit of an individual from childhood.

To conclude

, I believe any boy/girl should not be treated with too many restrictions.

Instead

, let them enjoy their independence so that they can explore new ideas and impose a few necessary

rules

which will shape them as better citizens in the future.