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Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many people believe that academic institutions are the better path to understanding the nuance of
business
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the rest of them feels that it could be in different ways as well.
This
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non institutional
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 way of learning the
business
 and will give more impact
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 a person's future.
Firstly
, some people think that understanding
business
 through theory is an
age old
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 method and they are tested through times,
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many billionaires from the
last
 century are well credited by academics.
Secondly
, getting knowledge through institutions gives students many use cases of successful ventures from the past, which in turn reduces the investment of time and money in bad ideas by the budding entrepreneurs. As per
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usiness insider, only eighteen
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 of
business
 venture became successful in the
last
 century.
However
, others feel that learning
business
 practically has its own charms. When someone
work
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 along with an established mentor the chances of understanding the
business
 concepts much higher than of theoretical understanding. A study states that many successful
business
 people in the
last
 twenty years are drop-outs and started
thier
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their
 career early through mentoring.
Additionally
, the perk of learning by work is that we can earn
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onthly income
instead
 of paying heavy fees for college which
also
 increases the self-confidence. To conclude, both sides have their pros and cons, though in my opinion understanding
business
 insights through practical work overweighs learning through a college or university education.
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