Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem every kid must acquire skill in playing the musical

instrument

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, certain groups of people oppose and affirm it is a wastage of

time

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to try acquiring a knowledge of the musical

instrument

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. I reckon every

younster

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youngster

must not be capable of playing the musical

instrument

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of all, it is an inevitable fact that not every young teenager has

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artistic talent in learning the musical

instrument

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as everyone is unique. Individuals just have to find out in what field they gifted

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so that he or she will be called as a prodigy, after spending a particular

time

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in that field.

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, it is said that a fish swims in water better than any animals, but it would suffer if the fish gets obliged to climb a tree, the fish will think of itself as

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ailure for the rest of its life, which is tragic right?

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, it is just ironic to burden everyone to acquire skill in playing the musical

instrument

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,

also

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it is an

undenyable

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undeniable

fact that the untalented children assigned to become competent in playing

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nstrument will

lost

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a lot of

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and take

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damage mentally.

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of it, it is beneficial

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pend

time

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and effort diligently on a thing captivating their mind.

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,

Reyleigh

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Rayleigh

left his daily job to chase his passion to become a writer, after years of ups-and-down he regarded as one of the apt authors in his

time

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, it is essential to chase your passionate activity but not only musical instruments. In conclusion, from the ideas and examples given, I firmly believe every kid is not obliged to acquire a knowledge of the musical

instrument

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, as there are many children who despise things relating to

musics

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music

kinds of music

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