Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem every kid must acquire skill in playing the musical
instrument
;
in contrast
, certain groups of people oppose and affirm it is a wastage of
time
to try acquiring a knowledge of the musical
instrument
. I reckon every
younster
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youngster
must not be capable of playing the musical
instrument
.
First
of all, it is an inevitable fact that not every young teenager has
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artistic talent in learning the musical
instrument
as everyone is unique. Individuals just have to find out in what field they gifted
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so that he or she will be called as a prodigy, after spending a particular
time
in that field.
For instance
, it is said that a fish swims in water better than any animals, but it would suffer if the fish gets obliged to climb a tree, the fish will think of itself as
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ailure for the rest of its life, which is tragic right?
Hence
, it is just ironic to burden everyone to acquire skill in playing the musical
instrument
.
Secondly
,
also
it is an
undenyable
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undeniable
fact that the untalented children assigned to become competent in playing
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nstrument will
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a lot of
time
and take
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damage mentally.
Instead
of it, it is beneficial
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pend
time
and effort diligently on a thing captivating their mind.
For example
,
Reyleigh
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Rayleigh
left his daily job to chase his passion to become a writer, after years of ups-and-down he regarded as one of the apt authors in his
time
.
Thus
, it is essential to chase your passionate activity but not only musical instruments. In conclusion, from the ideas and examples given, I firmly believe every kid is not obliged to acquire a knowledge of the musical
instrument
, as there are many children who despise things relating to
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