The position of women in the society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arises from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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with, the predominant reason behind the number of criminal activity done by children is that this
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