Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Dealing with environmental problems can be done on
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international level, while other people believe that these problems can be handled on
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ountry basis. Some small steps
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a bigger movement ,
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all the nations should take initiatives to save the environment.
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ountry like
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is facing air pollution on a massive scale.
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ndians are getting breathing problems like asthma and other skin problems .
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overnment has passed some strict rules. According to one of them, in the capital Delhi on even dates only the cars with even numbers can be run on the road and vice versa. Actually, Canadian
goverenment
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banning the use of plastic bags in the country.
On the other hand
, some environmental activists give preference to apply some rules on
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nternational level to save the planet earth.
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, activists like Greta Thunberg suggests that plastic should be banned all over the world to save the oceans and its creatures as most of the scare sea animals are
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their lives by eating plastic. No doubt, the rising temperature of
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arth is not a problem of only one nation. All the countries
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to come together to save the environment. In nutshell, it can be declared that all the countries have equal responsibility on their shoulders to save the only livable planet.
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, developed countries can contribute financially in spreading awareness regarding the global environmental crisis and regulating their industries on the use of products which are
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hazardous
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