Some people think thot cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed of tourists. Others believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss on both sides and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable that cultural traditions attract lure from all over the world and develop

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ocal economy. Some individuals are of the opinion that these may be destroyed if they are modified to attract tourists. Others,

however

, hold the view that if we don't use them for

tourism

, these cultural attractions will die. ln the following paragraphs, I shall discuss both sides of the argument. l, personally side with the latter view. We have to make these cultural traditions alluring for tourists

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because we need tourists.

Firstly

,

tourism

boosts our economy and

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we get a chance to spread our

culture

to different countries.

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our artists and artisans do not earn money from their art, which depicts our

culture

and tradition,

then

this

art will die off and we'll only be the losers.

Tourism

is the backbone of any country's economy and every country does its effort to attract tourists. Many people depend on

tourism

for their livelihood. People in the food industry hotel industry and transport industry

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on

tourism

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and to present nicely some change is unavoidable.

On the other hand

, when cultural traditions are used as money-making attractions, they lose their original features. Sometimes it makes cultural traditions disappear altogether.

However

, I believe that

culture

and tradition are

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and minor superficial changes cannot harm them in any way. Change is the law of nature and all we should look into it that the changes are made with caution to retain the inherent elements of

culture

. Summing up, to save cultural traditions we need to make some changes to make them captivating to the tourist of today.

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if

we don't do so we'll lose our cultural traditions altogether and we'll lose our tourists

also

.