Governments should make more effort to promote alternative sources of energy. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued by some that governments should take initiatives to extract energies from other resources. I agree

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because governments should have a proper calculation before they shift to another source. To commence with, many sources of

energy

are available like water and solar

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. By encouraging people to have solar panels on

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utilise the maximum of use of sun’s rays.

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, in many parts of India, farmers use solar panels to run electric motors and to charge farming

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However

, the major form of

energy

we utilise nowadays is from coal and gas. Even though it is exploited by mankind, it is the easiest and the most convenient method to generate electricity when compared with other resources.

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, water can

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be used as a resource. But before the government promotes all these they must do a well-prepared feasibility study. They must ensure that those are safe for the environment, and

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should check whether it would meet the demands of people.

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, in a country like India, with a tropical climate, most of the places experience drought conditions where water cannot

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as an efficient resource to generate electricity.

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overnment should come up with a perfect plan before execution.

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coal and gas may run out in the future,

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overnment can explore new sites to obtain these fossil fuels, as these are efficient and completely meets the people’s need. In conclusion , to a certain extent, I would agree that governments should emphasis on new alternative

energy

these days, but it should be eco-friendly, and

also

should fulfil the peoples' demands.