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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience .

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Nowadays, technology is taking place in every field from home to office, and in every work either it is on a smaller or higher level.
Therefore
, the ways of communication are
also
 changing dramatically due to the new technological innovations, as people prefer an electronic conversation
instead
 of writing a letter. I completely agree with
this
 notion.
To begin
 with, there is no more long wait to get a reply from the other person, as in an electronic message or mail, one can get a quick reply back from his near and dear ones, which decreases the stress and anxiety to some level, as there is no time gap between the conversations.
For example
, during the festive season, people prefer to send
an
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emoji’s, celebrative stickers and multimedia messages to share their exact feelings within minutes from various
devices
such
 as smartphones, landline phones, emails and
from
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other applications too.
As a result
, they get a fair chance to be with everyone, on a festive day
instead
 of waiting weeks for a wish back. To add on, using modern communication
devices
 it becomes easy and cheap to connect worldwide. As, there are no additional charges to call overseas to have a word and it is even best to have a facetime with everybody who is living far without any extra cost, which was usually a case with the postage stamps in the previous times.To illustrate, international students who are living far away from their families, prefer internet services
instead
 of a post or a letter to communicate with their parents every day, as it is more
economic
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, and they have to pay once
in
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a month with an unlimited opportunity to connect with their relatives. In short, having modern
devices
 make life
stressfree
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 and uncomplicated. To conclude, modern communication
devices
 are taking place of the old methods of conversation with other people as they come with a higher level of accuracy, effectiveness and efficiency
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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