The office you work in does not have any cafeteria for staff. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell, what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have about setting up a cafeteria

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Dear Sir or Madam Hope
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didnot
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did not
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time. I know that you have so many other important
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at work. But the issue
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want to raise here is the
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for our
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. The reason for which
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am writing
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letter is that our office
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have any cafeteria for
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. where they can enjoy their snacks and drinks. most of the
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members go outside for meal and it takes 10 to 15 minutes and that time is wasting our work time too. Sometimes the weather is not friendly so you understand the whole situation here.
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would like to request you to set up a cafeteria in
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room. The room
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in a corner near to office and
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noticed we did not use that room for a while. so in
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did not go outside.
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hope you
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consider
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issue and arrange
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soon, thank you in advance. yours faithfully,
rohit
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