In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this issue?

There is currently a contentious argument over whether teenagers should do some real-time labour that gets them paid. In our present society, there are people who are against making children

work

.

However

, I believe that a child can achieve some valuable

experience

which could greatly help them in finding jobs when they grow-up, and they will

also

not feel tired of constantly focusing on learning at schools.

Firstly

, the main

reason

I believe

this

is because if a child starts doing paid jobs they will gain some professional practice and

as a result

,

this

would help them in acquiring jobs easily when they are matured.

For instance

, in Korea, children are asked to working summer to gain

work

experience

, and

therefore

the country has a good employment rate. For

this

reason

, I strongly believe that children should have some

work

experience

.

Secondly

, another

reason

I believe

this

notion is due to the fact that youngsters find it refreshing doing a job rather than spending the whole time in learning at the school.

For example

, a survey was conducted in India on children, and

this

revealed that children who

work

in summer feel refreshing and enthusiastic when going back to school for summer holidays.

This

is another

reason

I am not against making children

work

. In conclusion, some people in our society think it might burden a child if they are asked to

work

.

Nevertheless

, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and

this

is why I strongly support the context that children need to be sent to

work

not just to gain

experience

but

also

to make them feel refreshed.