Some people believe that tourists do not learn anything during their holidays, while others believe that they learn a lot. Discuss both sides .

In old-time tourism was not a very popular option to spend vacations. But nowadays, most of
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eople enjoy travelling to new places during their holidays . In my opinion, we as a visitor learn a lot of new things but still
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there are few persons who believe that being a tourist is not at all beneficial. In
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we are going to discuss both of these points. Being a
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,
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involves a variety of expenses
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as travelling costs, accommodation, food etc. which is not everyone's cup of tea. Many people think that a lot of time is wasted and it involves physical stress as well while travelling. It is
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believed that, roaming here and there as a sightseer is not safe as we are not aware of the areas and mentality of people. Considering all these factors, it is believed that
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isitor does not learn anything during their holidays.
On the other hand
, travelling to new places can bring more knowledge about different cultures and languages. Few bloggers
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treat
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as an opportunity to make new blogs and earn through it.
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, there are so many youtube channels which
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promote tourism by creating new videos while going on vacation. One can
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hort term while travelling to make some extra income.
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is an opportunity to keep oneself away from their daily stressful job and get some relaxation while enjoying the visitor place. It will always be a debatable issue but in my opinion, tourists can learn a variety of new things while their holidays and as well they can earn some money if they plan their trip smartly.
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but not the least, as a sightseer
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we make new friends and sometimes one can find his/her soulmate while travelling.
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