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should we take class online or offline do you agree or not ?

#class #offline
Online classes give a great impact on
student
 life online classes keep lots of benefits
also
 give the
student
 experience in their education.
To begin
 with,during
this
 pandemic all colleges and schools had to close because the gathering is not allowed classroom convert to online classes with the help of Technology students do not gather and
s
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tudent doesn'
t
 need together with other peers and ID because the
student
 comes different places to college and school by public transport they don'
t
 need to come school and college for their lectures they can attend easily at their home online classes are easy convenient for a
student
 in
this
 situation maintaining distance with other people is very important to safe from virus.
Moreover
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these online classes are given the opportunity to students to plan study for their whole day
instead
 of another way around anytime and anywhere
student
 can study and work at their convenient it gives learner plenty of time to learn more and more things on there leisure time it is a very flexible and comfortable
student
 can easily interact with their teachers who are not much comfortable to ask the question in front of other peers they can talk with their teachers without any hesitate
however
 teachers can pay attention their students individually students
also
 really enjoy that online classes and it really works for
student
 attendance
also
 students appreciate the software and online material using in online education online classes is a very useful right now
student
 it doesn'
t
 need to stop their studies. In conclusion,it is true that online classes work very good in
student
 education but we can'
t
 select
this
 option for whole life online classes give the
student
 more and more time for their personal hobbies so that they can pursue their hobbies.
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