You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Ishan Saverdekar, and I have purchased a wireless router from your shop to use the internet
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week.
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, it started showing a bug after using just three days.
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, I am writing
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letter to complain to you about
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device.
Althought
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the equipment was working fine till yesterday, it started buzzing and rebooting itself frequently. To fix it, I tried to restart the device and checked all
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, but did not work. Basically, I am a Website Developer, and my work
is depend
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upon the internet which I cannot access without the wireless router.
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, I have a strict deadline for website projects from my clients that I have to deliver by
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week,
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otherwise
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I will lose a huge amount of money.
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, I really want you to replace the unit with a new one or inform me, and provide the refund, so I can buy a new device on an urgent basis. I have attached my account detail with
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letter for the refund process. Please find the attachment. I am a long-aged customer of your shop;
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I look forward to your positive and quick action on
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matter. Yours faithfully, Ishan Saverdekar
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