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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why this might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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In today's contemporary era, owning a
house
 is the biggest dream of every human being. In many nations, people prefer to buy their own
house
. There
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lethora of reason behind the scenario. I,firmly believe that
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is a
 positive situation.
This
 essay will surround my opinion. To commence, there are multifarious reasons which encourage people to buy their own home.
Firstly
, renting a
house
 is very costly, sometimes monthly charges are more than
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half of the salary of the people which results
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 financial crisis throughout the month.
Secondly
, the Non- cooperative nature of the landlord with restrictions increases the frustration ends up with migration time and again.
Furthermore
, rented place
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 often offered only for
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ertain period of time like for 8 months or a year and
then
 it has to change which can be a
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hazardous
 situation of any individual. All in all, the unreasonable amount of rent, restrictions or order to empty the place at any time these reasons promote any individual to buy their own
house
. The scenario of buying
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wn
house
 have certainly many advantages. To explain, buying
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wn venture needs
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igantic amount of money so people work harder to earn and save money management skills. What is more, people invest more in real estate which increases employment opportunities.
last
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ore secure life and wealth which can be used by coming generations. All in all, buying
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wn home builds management skills, profound life and wealth. In my pragmatic cognization, due to
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 demand of landlord and constraints
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people are more willing to buy their own
house
 which
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 their future more secure and profound
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