For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

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has been an integral part of communities
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time has changed so as people's values.
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Lifesaving medical
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research
and life comforting technologies like mobile phones and automobiles and financial
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business
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have gained a lot of popularity, disregarding the importance of
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. To bring back people’s attention
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cultural
festival must be celebrated. In
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significance and way to revive
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interest will be discussed.
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reakthrough in healthcare services and advance to ease communication and a high financial
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diving people’s interest in
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people are being treated for the
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diseases
which were considered deadly for mankind which increased its value over others.
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, humans are easily treated for cancer which was earlier considered to be dangerous.
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, cellphones made it
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to communicate as compared to past and cars have made the commute easy which improved the quality of life making them
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valuable
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, because of cellphones,
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all can be made within seconds in any part of the world , earlier letters
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to take weeks to reach.
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, ease of communication and commute and better healthcare made
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undervalued.
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, the only way to draw people’s attention is to host cultural festivals and including celebrities to promote
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of all, By people visiting the festivals,
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ense of cultural pride can be revived which may help to catch mass’s eye.
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, craft eve’s may help to connect
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opulation with their rich past. As an example, festivals hosted by Italy have kept their love for
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intact.
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of all, people are influenced by
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celebrities and follow them, they can be asked to promote
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famous actor
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India is promoting historical paintings because of which painting artist have gained a lot of
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recognition
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ultural festival will help
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to get its deserved value. In summary, Better medical services and life comforting assets have made the popularity of
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to go down which may
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by conducting festivals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • STEM fields (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics)
  • evolve
  • technological advancements
  • overshadowing
  • financial pressures
  • practical careers
  • digital entertainment
  • accessible
  • integrated
  • curricula
  • fostering
  • emotional intelligence
  • public art projects
  • engage
  • interactive
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