Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In today's world, traffic is a major concern in most
of
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apply
the
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cities
and governments are implementing several innovative ideas to control Use synonyms
this
. Some Linking Words
people
believe that restricting the entry of private Use synonyms
vehicles
in prime areas of the Use synonyms
city
will aid in reducing the congestion, Use synonyms
whereas
, others think it is not a feasible solution. In my opinion, I disagree with the notion of banning personally owned Linking Words
vehicles
in Use synonyms
city
centres, Use synonyms
instead
, several other measures should be taken to tackle Linking Words
this
issue.
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Firstly
, congestion does not happen only in Linking Words
city
centres or the main localities of the Use synonyms
city
. Nowadays, every Use synonyms
city
is growing rapidly and the problem of traffic is persistent all over the Use synonyms
city
. Rather than, restricting the entry of Use synonyms
vehicles
into specific locations, it is better to reduce the number of Use synonyms
vehicles
that Use synonyms
hits
the road. Wrong verb form
hit
For example
, in India, the Delhi government started Linking Words
"Odd-Even"
process, in which vehicle Correct article usage
the "Odd-Even"
number
ending with odd numbers will be taken out on odd dates and vehicle Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
number
ending with even numbers will be hitting the roads on even dates. Fix the agreement mistake
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Secondly
, governments should encourage Linking Words
people
to opt for public transport rather than travelling in their own Use synonyms
vehicles
. These steps will benefit both the government and the general public in reducing the congestion in the Use synonyms
cities
.
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On the other hand
, not many Linking Words
cities
are capable of restricting the use of private Use synonyms
vehicles
completely. There could be several reasons like lack of infrastructure, facilities and poor public transport arrangements. In Use synonyms
such
a scenario, the Linking Words
people
residing in the Use synonyms
city
are left with no other option than driving in their own cars or bikes. When Use synonyms
cities
are struggling to implement strict rules, it is always better to start with simple steps like banning Use synonyms
the
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apply
vehicles
from entering some of the prime areas in the Use synonyms
city
. In Use synonyms
this
way, even the Linking Words
people
will get acclimatized to the new rules slowly, so that they do not revolt when Use synonyms
further
restrictions are brought in the future.
In conclusion, I believe that the local authority should come up with creative and innovative ideas Linking Words
of
reducing the traffic problem in bigger Change preposition
for
cities
. Just Use synonyms
by
banning entries in some Change preposition
apply
part
may serve some purpose but the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
overall
problem still prevails as the Linking Words
cities
are expanding at a rapid pace.Use synonyms
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