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Should arts-related entertainment venues such as museums and art galleries be free of charge for the general public, or should a charge apply for admittance? Discuss this issue, and give your opinion.

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 people often debate whether entertainment related to arts venues including museums and
art
 galleries should be free of cost or not.
Although
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 for it being
cost free
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, I would support
this
 who are of
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pposite opinion. I will discuss both the views and reasons for my support
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 the latter in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with, those who supports the access
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 museums and
art
 galleries should be free of charge for the common people due to education benefits.
This
 is because
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 lot more and more individuals will visit these places, they might get to know a lot about our history and various pieces of arts.
As a result
, it may increase their knowledge and understanding
about
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 the local culture.
Also
, it can be an excellent way to teach our future generations about our glorious past through various exhibitions in a museum.
However
, I believe,it is important to acknowledge that preserving museums and
art
 museums is a mammoth
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 due to huge
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maintenance
 costs.
This
 is because a lot of workers are hired to preserve the antiques kept in these places.
For instance
, Big Splash is a renowned museum situated in New Delhi employs around 30 workers for the cleaning, security and
preservance
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preserving
preserve
 of various artefacts. As a consequence, a huge amount of cash is spent in form of
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remuneration
remunerations
 for employees.
In contrast
, if people are admitted free of cost in the museums and
art
 galleries, they might not be able
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ustain due to lack of funds. In conclusion,
although
 having free access to museums and
art
 galleries brings benefits of educating children and
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eneral public at large, in my opinion, it should not be made cost-free owing to enormous conservational costs.
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