In many countries it is common for families to own and run their business. Some people think it is the best way to run a business while other consider this a potential source of problems. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

The expertise of any
business
comes from the fact that knowledge comes from numbers of years spent in mastering any product or knowing every little detail of the
business
.
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we should not force our thoughts on anyone because it kills their creativity and
passion
. Running a
business
which your family owns gives you an advantage of
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xperience they have had and the flexibility to focus on increasing the
business
. Family members who have been running the
business
share the good and bad decisions they have taken which you may learn for and do the best for
business
.
This
gives a person
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ot of advantage as he/she already know what can be the best for the future of the
business
. Whereas imposing someone to run an already running
business
kills their
passion
and their creativity to try something new which they are good at or can excel to become the best at what they like. We should always follow our
passion
or our likes because by doing that work does feel like work and you feel happy about your life.
For example
, if an Olympics sports player family had a
business
and he had done the same
business
he would have not tried to enter into sports following his/her
passion
.
Therefore
ruining a preowned
business
or starting a new
business
should be one's choice and he/she should enjoy doing it. Work is the place where you spend most of your time earning bread and butter and one should cheery doing his.her work.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • commitment
  • understanding
  • trust
  • flexibility
  • decision-making
  • legacy
  • stability
  • conflicts of interest
  • professionalism
  • succession planning
  • nepotism
  • qualified
  • sustainability
  • leverage
  • risks
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