Since most information about culture and history can be found on the internet, museums are not needed anymore. To what extent do you agree ?
Museums are the most famous places to learn about we can see the real art and cultures how they used to live and survive in those days and we can
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Firstly
, in current days internet is mostly used by all the people and its a user friendly
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user-friendly
nternet
you can just sit in your home and can get the information about the Correct your spelling
internet
history
and the culture through the world, nowadays people are very busy with there schedules they will not have time to visit places so, we can save the information and go through it when ever
you get free time. If you use Google to search about the Correct your spelling
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istory
we can get different versions on it and how different people explained about them in there way and you can read them in your comfortable languages. Correct your spelling
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For example
, while i
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wanted to know more deeply about that since, Change the capitalization
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Secondly
, it is not only important to just read about history
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see their lifestyles and kind of food they and weapons they use. It is better to visit museums when it is possible and this
will help present generations to know about the past and cultures of their particular country or religions they can enjoy and will get excited by watching those things. For example
, i
took one of my brother's son to the Change the capitalization
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back in my country he was so excited and learned a lot of things by looking at the art and sculpture.
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and cultures and both of them have their own benefits in current generations.Submitted by saicharan.voddula on
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