Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

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Forests play a major role in climate change and they are often called as lungs of the earth. In
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recent years
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there is a huge increase in cut down of trees to benefit mankind.
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phenomena. Climate is majorly influenced by the forests and
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responsible for maintaining ecological balance. There are a plethora of reasons that led to deforestation. At the foremost,
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ncrease in human population leads to
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of land resources for
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and out of the cities and are being turned into concrete jungles.
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, forests are cut-down for resources
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as wood, bamboo and timber for furniture and paper making industry.
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, trees are pulled off to create land space for agricultural activities. Deforestation leads to various adverse effects. Since trees and plants act as
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natural air purifying agents, cutting down them can lead to
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ncrease in air pollution.
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, since they tend to lose their natural habitat due to forests cut down. To exemplify, according to a BBC survey, the total number of tigers in India are currently 1500 which used to be at 2500 a decade ago.
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, it is clear that certain wildlife
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on the verge of extinction.
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, the earth temperature is rising
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causing the
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of water levels across the globe.
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otential for causing geographical changes. All in all, there is no doubt that human evolution is directly responsible for the cause of deforestation.
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, the results are detrimental to
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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