Nowadays, pollution and waste levels are increasing rapidly. How does this affect ordinary people? What steps can be taken to overcome this problem?

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In the modern era,with the advancement of technology,there are many
problems
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which are faced by natives and one of them is
pollution
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. As these days toxic fume is increasing fastly. As
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on humans and there are many measures to tackle the
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in subsequent paragraphs. To initiate
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the health
problem
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caused by
pollution
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. As the toxic fume
emmited
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emitted
by
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motorcars
,industries lead to many issues related to health
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as
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asthma
,skin,heart
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and many more. As the consequence, it
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can
alse
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also
lead to death.
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, a survey was conducted by
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unversity
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university
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reveal that more than 10%
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f world population died due to
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problems
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caused by
pollution
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.
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eleasing of harmful gases
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our ozone layer is
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depleting day by day. So the sun rays are coming directly to earth and direct
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rays increase skin
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and many other
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are
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caused due to it . Moving towards
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olution,
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overnment should make strict rules regarding
pollution
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caused by industries and cars.
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,
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uge amount of fine should
be impose
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on those who will
emmit
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emit
harmful gases and proper public awareness camp should be held so that
indiviuals
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individuals
should get aware of
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ad effect of
pollution
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. To put it
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utshell,there are many
problems
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caused by
pollution
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but many measures can be taken by higher authorities and individuals to reduce it.
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