Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is often argued that humans should put efforts to save all wild

animals

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, while others are of the opinion that only selected

animals

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should be protected.

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essay agrees that every wild animal needs to be saved and it will be justified in the following paragraphs along with the discussion of both the views. The growing number of bodies are concerned about endangered

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. Some of the

fauna

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have already become extinct while others are on the verge of

extinction

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. Every

fauna

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has

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crucial role in the ecological cycle and loss of one would surely have an impact on the others.

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, studies show that when 'Doda' became extinct in early 18th century, few of the plants including some

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became endangered within 30-40 years of

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of 'Doda' because of their interdependence.

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, every

fauna

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needs to be protected.

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, because of the enormous expenditure over the various programs run by the governments to save endangered

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, numerous people have suggested that only the

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with a significant role in our ecological system should be saved from

extinction

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is non-acceptable, as even if any of the wild creatures do not have a significance in people's lives, the loss of gene diversity would be permanent and it will be irreversible damage.

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, every creature has been gifted by nature a set of genes which are unique and with the loss of that animal those genetic materials would

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be lost. To conclude,

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the cost of preserving every animal may be on the extreme side, the preservation of every

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is necessary because of their crucial role in our ecological system.

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, they should be protected to preserve their unique genetic material which

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would

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get lost along with their

extinction

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

300 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
ecosystem
conservation status
ecological significance
holistic approach
endangered species
natural heritage
unforeseen negative impacts
economically non-viable
prioritization
ecosystem balance
conservation efforts

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