Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Friendship
is an Imperative part of the journey of a human being. Some
people
believe that having
friends
of equal opinions is better, while others believe in having their pals who sometimes don't agree with them. In my
opinion
, it is important to have our
friends
who
supports
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our
opinion
and sometimes disagree with us. When two
people
bond with each other, irrespective of their gender we say a
friendship
is blooming in between them. The bond is a result of two irrefutable facts.
Firstly
, we always like
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it
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hen we have someone who is advocating the same thought or an
idea
.
For example
, in my college project
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we as a group had to provide an
idea
on which the project will be implemented, and when
i
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I
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presented the
idea
, my friend
john
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John
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was advocating on the same
idea
which made me feel really good as my
idea
was appreciated.
Secondly
, there
has
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to be common interests between two human beings. To illustrate, my
friendship
with john blossomed, when offered to drive me home on our
first
day in college, I came to know he is a huge football and baseball fanatic, and I sharing the same interest really helped in connecting with him.
As a result
, we can say that having
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riend who has accepts your
opinion
and sharing
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ame interest will surely
helps
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help
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in having a good conversation.
Conversely
, having all your
friends
of the same
opinion
doesnt
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doesn't
give the true picture of life.
Firstly
, there are always different aspects of looking at things and everyone having the same
idea
may sometimes put us in a position from where we cannot get a solution
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.
For example
, in my workplace,
i
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I
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had put an
idea
to my boss, and he
being
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a proponent of the same
idea
implemented the same in the workplace. My other
collegue
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colleague
had a different
idea
which he
didnt
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didn't
like as he was too much overwhelmed by my
idea
, and ultimately my
idea
was not good and the project failed. Later, my superior followed the
idea
of my subordinate and it was very much successful.
In other words
, what I mean to say is having a single
idea
and looking for
friends
who
supports
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the same, constraints our thoughts which may often prove wrong. To conclude, we cannot
chose
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between
friendship
based on
people
who
supports
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support
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our
opinion
.
However
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it is
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always
neccessary
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necessary
for
people
sharing common interest and thoughts for
friendship
to
florish
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flourish
,
however
having
friends
who sometimes disagree with us is
also
imperative as it gives us
a different aspects
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different aspects
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of looking things. In my
opinion
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the best choice is to have
friends
who
advocates
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our
opinion
and sometimes disagree with the same.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • harmonious
  • stress-free
  • disagreements
  • conflicts
  • reinforce
  • validate
  • comforting
  • reassuring
  • broaden your understanding
  • perspectives
  • challenge intellectually
  • think critically
  • personal growth
  • development
  • healthy debates
  • communication skills
  • mutual respect
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