It is widely acknowledged that there are significant learning differences between boys and girls. Therefore many people believe that single-sex education in the best method to help students succeed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a system? Give reasons for your answer and your opinions.

Many people argue about the productivity of single-gender learning in enhancing the achievement of students success compared to mix-education, due to
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smarter environment for studying
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because the curriculum can be prepared to fit their speed of understanding as well as specific subjects more appropriate for
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would improve receiving information efficiently,
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,students of the same kind will be more self-confident in themselves and can collaborate in
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ood manner.
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, while we were in Egypt, my daughters did not find any difficulty to offer presentation in the class as all their colleagues were girls compared to what happened now in mix-schools.
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, a class of one gender can not mimic real-life situations, in higher education or workplaces in the future. whereas, it makes dealing with another kind of people in reality worth and much more difficult.
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between the couples after marriage, as many studies mention in recent years. Females who have social relationships with males from youth are more successful in their marriage life than their counterparts who remained for
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ong time avoid getting close to men in any events or places. So I can see two
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student learning comes with benefits in terms of creating
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ppropriate environment for productive education, the drawbacks regarding affecting the ability of both
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