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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Writing
letters
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 has been one of the essential means of communication
since
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 centuries. With the advancement of technology, nowadays, there are numerous modern gadgets available that convey
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information faster. But have the
letters
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 lost their importance?
This
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letters
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 are still important despite various other better options.
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are
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number
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a number
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 of electronic devices present in the form of computers, laptops and mobile phones in
this
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 modern world.
Furthermore
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, Internet has
also
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 enhanced their usage.
For instance
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, today humans can have
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verbal
conversation
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conversations
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 through mobile phones. Apart from that, individuals may contact their friends and family members by video calling on Whatsapp. It is
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 helpful for the patients to consult the doctor online so as to save time.
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,
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technology has become an important part
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 connecting with other people.
On the other hand
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,
letters
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 are written from
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ancient times till now.
Although
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, they are not commonly used as a mode of transferring messages from one person to the other. But they play a major role in multinational companies and
government
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 sector where formal and semiformal
letters
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 are often needed to be written. They are proven to be useful as
a strong evidence
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strong evidence
a piece of strong evidence
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 in court. Currently, a pen and paper
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 seldom needed for sending
letters
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 because they are mostly sent through email.
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 but not the least, their necessity is less for students as they got the chance to improve their writing skills. In my point of view, the technology is getting advanced day by day enabling everyone to connect easily and at a faster rate but
letters
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 are
also
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 successful in many sectors whether it be
public
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 or private sector.
Letters
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 have preserved their existence and they would not seem to
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vanish
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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